Friday, 30 October 2015

sentence - Please suggest a better transition phrase as compared to "Coming to"

Excerpt from my essay:




Coming to my industrial experience, I am currently working in...




My professor's comment on my essay:




I think you want to transition to industrial experience from undergrad
exp... but use a better starting phrase maybe."




Can someone suggest a better transition phrase than "Coming to"?

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