"She told us a story, it was a very nicely packed story but..." Is there a better way to say "nicely packed story"?
There was this person who gave us a speech and she shared a personal story. It was a nice story, "nicely packed" as a called it but when you look closely, the story pointed to the wrong thing and it was bad, but she made it sound very good. So what I want to do is to create a sentence which says she told us a very nicely packed story, beautiful on the outside, sounds great, but really rotten on the inside when you think about it.
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