Saturday 1 August 2015

grammaticality - Combining 3 sentences

Just a few small changes are required:




Most of the above methods often rely on {using / applying [CHOOSE ONE]} the crown height model (CHM) followed by seeking the local maxima, which is the peak position of the CHM.




While I'm not a big fan of applying or followed by, they're the norm in academic prose, and I'm not getting paid to revise this, so this is good enough to pass muster with most journal editors and reviewers.

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